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Waiting by ~MLPie:iconMLPie:



Waiting

Inside an IHOP (within this nation),
You deliberately wait and fight temptation.
Syrup seeps into pancakes forming single combinations,
A sticky, starchy transmutation,
And you experience a kind of salivation
Called sweet anticipation.

Between ordering and hunger's salvation
There is a particularly rightful indignation
As you curse the foreigners inside the kitchen,
The government's stance on immigration,
The under-funding of special education,
And the human love of procrastination.

But things must taste sweeter after frustration
Or you'd just have an instant breakfast from Carnation.
©2007-2008 ~MLPie
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I wrote this on a napkin. I wanted to make a sonnet, but my food came before I could edit it.

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~PeoplesBadmash:iconPeoplesBadmash: Feb 21, 2008, 2:07:13 AM
hahahaha!

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